OK so I apparently NEEDED a Beta BAD since I apparently stink at grammar. I feel so bad right about now. *sniff* Oh well new chapter is up for Phoenix Ashes and the link is:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5120286/9/
It contains MY take on Marcus' power. Since I didn't understand why it would work on Bella in Volterra I added another element. By the way even with the new element I still don't get how it would work so if you find my idea faulty I agree but I've got nothing else to go with.
Teaser that are subject to change from my horrible-grammar-ness:
"That... might work."
"Their connection is unnerving."
"How is it one such as you exists in a world with one such as him?" I asked rhetorically.
"Who could have made someone as innocent as you the lamb go and make a monster like the tiger?”
“Your mother tells me you like to read. Have you read any poems by William Blake?"
It will be Beta'd by Kisa44 as well hopefully.
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